Part IX: Zeromus’ Revenge
<author’s note: For some reason, I stopped using Paragraphs during this part.>
The slug gobbler that Dragon Flyer called Killed Boba Feet. Dragon Flyer retreated. Then Dragon Wheel’s other four sons attacked. Since I had I HP left, I was hopeless. Because I was hopeless, my bird, Thunder Bird, came and shot thunder at all of Dragon Wheel’s son except Dragon Flyer. They all died and the Star Destroyers all retreated. Then I saw my best friend Fuzz. Fuzz was sitting by a tree eating a Koopa Troopa. "Hey, Fuzz," I yelled. "What? Andrew? Is it about Tanyia?" Fuzz said. "No!" I yelled. "I hate her guts." "Why?" Fuzz said. "Because she’s on the bad side," I said. "I thought she was your..." Fuzz said as I interruped him. "Jamie’s girlfriend," I said. Fuzz joined. Now we set forward for Castle Baron.
Kain, my old friend which
betrayed me. He turned into a
dragon named Dragon Flyer.
He took over Castle Baron.
Now, I must save Nikki and
Tanyia from the bad side. I
must get help from Sonic
the hedgehog. Dragon Flyer’s in the
higest tower of my base. I must face
Dragoon Kain’s hatred. He has
both good and evil in his
heart. Kain’s Dragoon part as
my friend got destroyed, so
Zeromus got Kain and killed
his good and turned him
into a dragon. If I kill his hatred,
his good and evil
will be gone. He also will
be dead. Kain is so curious about
Zeromus’ power, so now he is on
Zeromus’ side.
<author’s note: I’d like to know what the HELL that means.>
Me and Fuzz entered Castle Baron. Me and Fizz had to get past Dragon Flyer’s Troops guarding our castle. There were ten defense walls. The 6th wall was guarded by a new troop, Air-Yo. "Fuzz, you look different," I said. "I got changed by a Koopa Troopa," Fuzz said. I used my magic and changed Fuzz back to his normal form. When we got to the 6th wall, we saw Air-Yo. "Yoster," I yelled. "Retreat," Air-Yo yelled as he retreated to the 10th wall. Fuzz and I went on to the 7th wall. We attacked a troopa at the 7th wall and won. We went on our way to the 8th wall. To pass the 8th wall, we had to beat Fire Saphead and his Stupid Fire Friends. When we attacked him, he used Firesap and killed Fuzz. "No!" I yelled. "Prepare to die!" I used Ice3 on Fire Saphead and killed him. When I killed Saphead, his Fire Friends died. "Yes!" I yelled. "Then I saw Sonic. "You’re the one!" "Me?" Sonic siad. "Yes!" I yelled out of breath. "I need you to help me save Nikki and Tanyia from the bad side." "Okay." Sonic joined. We went to the wall 9.
Sonic HP: 3913 Class: Hedgehog
At the 9th wall, I saw three troops taking Fuzz away. Sonic rolled up in a ball and attacked Dragon Flyer’s troops. Most of them retreated. "Yes!" I yelled. "I have to leave," Sonic said sadly. "Ha!" we heard. Sonic left. "Kain! Kain!" I yelled. "Ha!" Then I saw a boy in a cage. "Help," he said. I went to the cage and unlocked it. "Hi, I’m Ken," the boy said weak of hunger. "Who are you?" I said. "Ken, the son of Kain, but a dragon named Dragon Flyer claims me as his son." "Dragon Flyer is Kain and we must defeat him," I said. "Okay," Ken said. Ken joined.
Ken: HP: 1297 MP: 6 Class: Prince Race: Human
"Dragon Flyer stole mt robot, Chip," Ken said. "I’ll help you find him," I said. Went went off to wall 10. Ken broke the lock on castle wall #10. On the otherside I saw Air-Yo dead and saw a yelloe hedgehog with an orange dress and orange headband and a wierd hair style. "Ken, you’re back," the hedgehog said. "Ken! Change me," I said. "Okay," Ken said. Ken changed me younger. "Hi," I said to the hedgehog. "What’s her name," I said to Ken. "Amy," he said. I left to look for Nikki, Tanyia and Sonic. Meanwhile, Amy was talking to Ken, "I think..." "Andrew!" Ken interrupted. "...is cute," Amy said as I returned. "Tell him," Amy said. "Do you like Amy?" Ken said to me. "Yeah! She’s awesome! Also, cute," I said embaressed. "Cann... I mean, will you go out with me tomorrow night," Amy asked. "Sure," I said, "Eight’o clock?" "Yes!" Amy said, "My dream boy." Amy put her hands together and her pupils turned into hearts. We set up a camp and then went to sleep. At 8:00, Amy and I went to a dance in town Baron, a town all around Castle Baron, my castle. Now it is ruled by Dragon Flyer. After I danced, we sat down to eat. "I love you, Amy," I said rubbing her shoulders. "I lvoe you also, "Amy said as I rubbed her shoulders some more. I stopped rubbing her shoulders and sat down by her. She layed her head in my stomach and I stroked her hair. She lifted her head and we looked eye to eye. We brought our heads closer together until our lips were touching. We pushed our lips together and made our first kiss. We held it for 5 minutes, then let go. "You love me big time," Amy said. "I know," I said. I got up and rubbed her shoulders again. We both got up and danced again. We did the chicken. <author’s note: No comment.> After we danced more, we went back to east. We ate Hedge Fries and drank Pink Shakes. After Amy ate, she lay her head in my lap and went to sleep. In about 30 minutes, I woke her up. We went to play a two player arcade game called Beast Men. Amy and I played it together. We got to the last lever, then died. "Good job, Amy," I said as we hugged each other. In the morning, I woke up back at our camp. "Where are you from? Where have you been?" Amy asked me. <author’s note: I think that’s the first time I’ve used "asked" in that tense in all my writing so far.> I lived on planet Earth, but my planet got destroyed by Zeromus’ Death Star. I’ve been in both of the Death’s Star Wars. Actually, I’ve been in all the wars," I said. Amy looked surprised. The next day, I went to school. In
6th Grade: Sonic, Bee
5th Grade: Andrew, Ken, Nikki, Two Tails, Nick
4th Grade: Amy, Tanyia, Monica, Pattie, Nikki’s Brother
In Amy’s class... "Play with you at recess!" Monica said, a blue mouse with glasses, a purple dress and a wierd haristyle unlike Amy’s. At recess, Amy, Monica and a Fox like Two Tails, Pattie, played on the swings. I went over there with Ken. I asked Amy if she would play with me. After I said that, everbody started to laugh. My love with Amy was ruined with embaressment. After school, I walked home with Amy. "What’s wrong?" Amy said sadly and puzzled. "Nothing," I replied in a mad voice. "I still like you, Andrew," Amy said, wanting a kiss from me. We pushed our lips together and kissed. At the same time, we hugged each other. We did this repeatedly <author’s note: It says, "rapidly" in the original, but I think it’s wrong.> throughout our walk home. I thought about Nikki and Tanyia. "Tanyia," I said to myself. "What?" Amy said as she kidded me on the cheek. "Nothing," I said. This night we went to the dance. Meanwhile, troop 150,00,509,001 reported to Dragon Flyer. ‘This will be the best time to attack," he said. "Why?" Dragon Flyer said. "Because Andrew and Amy go out every night. Also he goes to school," a troop said. "Troops, make the attack!" Dragon Flyer yelled. That night, Amy came over to ym house. "Andrew!!! Dragon Flyer attacked my house and he’s coming for you," Amy told me. "It wouldn’t of happened if we didn’t go out. H emust have saw his chance to attack, because we went on dates, so my army wasn’t ready," I said. "I’ll help you defend Baron, Amy." <author’s note: Why would I help HER defend Baron? Baron is MY castle.> I went out to defend my castle...