My Big Adventure

Chapter I: The Cave

At school one day in 7th grade at the age of 13, I was watching a movie. All of a sudden the screen went blank. A robot dragon came on the screen.

"I robbed the city bank. If you want the money back come and get me. Ha! Ha! Ha!" the dragon said.

Then the movie went back on. Most of the kids thought it was a part in the movie, but Ken and I knew that I was not in there because we saw that movie before.

Ken is my best friend. He is 11 years old, has brown hair, white skin, and is about as tall as me.

Ken and I snuck out of school. We ran to my house. The kids didn’t know we were gone.

At my house in the side yard, we saw a flashing thing. Ken jumped in the flashing thing followed by me. Somewhere in the flashing thing, Ken and I got separated. Later, I found myself in a cave.

Then a green monster appeared from nowhere. Since I didn’t have a weapon, I ran away from the monster.

"Ken," I said to myself.

I ran into a nearby town. On the outside of the town there was a sign that said: Town of Fantasy.

I went in the town. Just as I went in, a red monster with a hat, a one-fingered claw on one hand, and pointed ears, called an Imp, popped up from a rock. He shot fire at me, but just missed. I picked up a sword lying on the ground. I went up to the monster, swung my sword and chopped his head off. I sighed with relief.

Near a door, I saw a cage with a turtle in it. The only thing different was that it had spikes on its shell. This animal was called an Anck.

The Anck made a whining sound. I went over to the cage. The key was on the ground next to the cage. I picked it up and unlocked the cage. The Anck came jumping out of the cage and licked my face.

"Hi," I said to the Anck.

"Hi, name my is ArmO," the Anck said. "And I live here. This world is called, Fantasy World."

"Come with me," I asked ArmO.

"Okay!" ArmO replied.

Some bricks fell under us. We landed in a dark cavern.

ArmO’s eyes lit up and light came out of them.

"My eyes can light up," ArmO said.

"Thanks," I said back to him.

On the stairway, we saw a note, it said:

Attacking the water pump

of Fantasy Town.

Dare you to stop me.

Ha! Ha! Ha!

X Dragon Wheel

At the end of the cavern we saw the water pump.

There was a bomb attached to the pump. I grabbed it and threw it behind us. It blew up collasping the cave behind us.

I went out the exit safely with ArmO.

 

Chapter 2: The Tower

We saw a tower in the distance. ArmO spotted three mutant Cave Crickets.

"Look," ArmO said.

I looked to the right of me and saw three cave crickets. A cave cricket is a regular cricket that I usually saw back home, but millions of time bigger.

ArmO’s spiked tail popped out from under his shell. ArmO’s tail was brown and looked like a ball and chain. He swung his tail and smacked a cave cricket in and it died. The other two crickets ran away unharmed.

Then a green, round, two-eyed monster ran over to me.

"Help! Help! Help!," the thing said.

"Who are you?" I said.

"Duke," he replied. "Tiamat, a fierce dragon, attacked my home. Please, help me."

"Okay. I’ll help you."

"Thank you!" Duke replied. "Tiamat’s castle is that way." Duke pointed to his right.

I saw a tall castle. It was black, round and had barely any windows. <author’s note: I’d call it more of a tower, as the title portrays it as well.>

"ArmO," I yelled. I looked around, but ArmO was not in sight. I went into the castle alone.

Meanwhile, Tiamat was instructing his robot, Warmchec. Warmech was a golden robot with two legs and three eyes.

"Warmech, take two guards with you and go stop that boy," ordered Tiamat.

"Yes, master," Warmech replied.

I was walking down a hallway on the third floor happily until Warmech attacked me. I jumped on one guard and grabbed his gun. Then I shot all the guards and they all died.

"It’s the end of the line for you. You’re the grass and I’m the lawn mower," Warmech said madly.

I set my gun for full power and zapped Warmech.

"I don’t feel so good," Warmech said coughing. The he melted.

In Dragon Wheel’s room, Dragon Wheel was yelling at Tiamat," Warmech got beaten. If he gets past you, I’ll be mad. " Tiamat left the room.

I went up some stairs to the fourth floor. Then the fierce dragon, Tiamat attacked me. I did a thing I didn’t have to think about. I took my sword and threw it at Tiamat. The sword hi Tiamat in the chest.. HE fell to the ground dead.

After Tiamat, I found a chest. I opened it. The stolen money from the back was in the chest. I decided to leave it alone. Then I left the castle.

<author’s note: Yeah, just leave the stolen money there...>

 

Chapter III: Dragon Wheel’s Attack

Before I got back, I heard a call on my pocket phone. <author’s note: How would Duke know his number?>
"Andrew, radioactive got dumped in my city. Please, help me! More and more is coming," Duke said. Then he hung up.

I went to Duke’s base. I saw big mutant eyeball things.

"Duke!" I yelled.

Then a pink eyeball monster ran up to me.

"My name is Cherbert," he said. "Duke went in that maze.

I looked at Cherbert. "Are you coming to?" I asked.

"I can...n..." Cherbert said as I cut him off.

"Are you going or not?" I asked him again.

"I guess so," he replied.

We went not very long before we saw Duke dead. We decided to leave the maze.

<author’s note: One thing I never found out: Why the hell did Duke go into a maze?>

A ship was in space coming close to Duke’s base.

Aboard the ship, Dragon Wheel.

"Hold you fire until we have an entire readout of the base," Dragon Wheel said.

I was at a pond with the eyeballs. They called it the fishing hole.

Toxic, a red eyeball monster, was fishing from a tree.

"The tree is cracking," Hairhead, a yellow eyeball monster yelled to Toxic.

"Aaaaah!" Toxic yelled as he fell in the water.

"I caught a bass," Hairhead said.

I was getting tired. "Let’s go," I said.

Cherbert handed me a red cap. "Keep this," he said.

Two lasers shot out of Dragon Wheel’s ship. When they hit, Duke’s base was gone.

We ran away from Duke’s base just before the lasers hit it. Cherbert and I ran in a warp before we got shot.

Dragon Wheel was looking out the window of his ship, thinking I was dead.

 

Part IV: Tanyia

We came out a warp at a place where hedgehogs lived.

"Human sized hedgehogs? Yeah, right," I said.

"You’ll just love Tanyia and she’ll go out with you," Cherbert told me.

"Yeah, right," I said again.

"Hey, Nikki, watch this," Tanyia said as she flew through the air on her rocket powered skateboard.

Tanyia was a pink human sized hedgehog. She was just a little bit shorter than me and was pink, <author’s note: You mean she wasn’t pink?> wore a red shirt, bracelets and an earring in each ear.

Nikki was purple, wore glasses and wore tennis shoes. She was about 4 1/2 feet tall; about as tall as me. Her hair was puffed up in the front.

Tanyia stopped her rocket board. She took something out of her pocket and fiddled around with her eyelashes.

"Can I try the rocket board?" Nikki asked.

Tanyia looked at the warp, ignoring Nikki. "Someone’s coming," Tanyia whispered. Tanyia went over to the warp as Nikki ran to her house.

"HI, Cherbert," Tanyia said. "Who is that boy?"

"Andrew," Cherbert replied.

I snuck the rocket board and went zooming off.

"Look..." Cherbert said.

"My rocket board," Tanyia yelled. Tanyia got up and ran after me.

I stopped the rocket board. Tanyia was behind me.

"Can I have my rocket board back?" Tanyia asked.

I didn’t answer, just handed back the rocket board. Then off she went.

I walked back to Cherbert. "Let’s go," I said.

We walked back into the warp. When we came out, we were at a place with lots of skate boarding track. Cherbert pulled out a rocket board. "Here, you can have mine," Cherbert said.

I got on it and pushed a button. I went zooming down the track. At the corner I went flying off the track.

"You can’t do it well," Cherbert said.

"Yeah, because you didn’t tell me anything about how to use it," I complained.

"Come to my school with..."

I cute Cherbert off. "Okay!" I answered.

 

Part V: Cherbert’s School

<author’s note: Great. Even the 6th grade revision has to have school in it...>

I entered the school very quietly. Cherbert went to the teacher.

"This is my friend, Andrew. Could he be in our class," Cherbert asked.

"Yes," the teacher replied.

The next day, I saw a kid, Fuzz, at school.

"Hi, Andrew," he said. "Can I play with you at recess?"

"Sure," I answered with delight.

Fuzz is about 2 feet tall. He has two long things coming out of his body <author’s note: No comment.> with eyes on top. His body was a big purple fuzz ball. His arm were very thin like a twig. His legs were bigger around and her wore tennis shoes.

Fuzz and I went inside for class. I sat next to Cherbert and Fuzz. We had a math lesson in class.

After math, the class went out for recess. I went to the swings. So did Fuzz. Cherbert went to play with some of his other friends.

"Now old are you?" Fuzz asked me.

"13," I said," and I’m going to be 14 in two months."

"Thanks," Fuzz said.

"What do you think about the new boy?" Nikki asked Tanyia.

"He’s nice, not cute, but loves my rocket board," Tanyia replied. "How about you, Nikki?"

"I think he’s a dork," Nikki replied.

"How about you, Amy," Tanyia asked.

Amy was a normal human. <author’s note: She was a hedgehog in the original.> She wore an orange dress and an orange headband. She really had a bad attitude.

"I think he’s a fag," Amy replied. <author’s note: Another, no comment.>
"And you, Alexis?" Amy asked.

"I said call me, Lex," Alexis yelled.

Lex was a precious 13 year old blonde haired girl. She has white skin. <author’s note: Damn, what’s with telling the skin color?> She was the nicest girl in Fantasy Land. I thought she was cute.

"Andrew is awesome," Lex said.

"You mean you want him as a boyfriend?" Nikki said.

Then Nikki, Tanyia and Amy walked away from Lex.

Tanyia came over to Fuzz and me.

"Do you like Lex?" Tanyia said.

"She’s okay," I replied. "I would kind of like her."

Tanyia ran back to Nikki and Amy.

"He loves Lex!" Tanyia yelled.

"I can’t wait to tell Lex about this," Amy said.

"You like Lex?" Fuzz asked me.

The recess bell rang.

"She’s okay," I replied.

The day went by fast. After school I went to Fuzz’s house.

The next day at first recess, I was playing by myself on the slide <author’s note: Yet, another no comment.> because Fuzz and his friends had something to discuss.

"Lex," Tanyia said out of breath," Andrew thinks you’re cute."

Lex looked surprised," He likes me?"

I went up the slide. Lex walked over to me with Tanyia behind her.

"Hey, Andrew, Lex..." Tanyia said as Lex covered Tanyia’s mouth.

Lex went up the slide. On the fifth step of the slide, Lex slipped and fell on the ground.

Tanyia ran off. "Bye," she yelled to Lex. <author’s note: A very reliable friend...>

I went down the ladder to help Lex. "Are you okay?" I asked.

"Do you like me?" Lex said quietly and in pain.

"No!" I lied. <author’s note: Come on, that was his big chance, what a loser.> "But, I have to go to a castle and defend it," I told Lex. <author’s note: Really? And when did this come about?>

"If anything should happen to you, I will..."

I interrupted Lex," Don’t come."

 

ChapterVI: Fuzz

A guard was taking a container of radioactive to Dragon Wheel. The guard tripped <author’s note: or fell> and the radioactive spilled on a koopa troopa. He turned into a guy named Long Neck Koopa. The radioactive also landed on an Alpha Metroid. The Metroid grew longer legs, four more eyes, longer horns and a longer and bigger nose. The Metroid crawled out the window like a spider.

"Guard, why did you trip or fall and break the last jar of radioactive?" Dragon Wheel yelled.

The next day after school, I called Fuzz on Cherbert’s phone. Fuzz answered it.

"Fuzz," I said. "Are you coming with me?" I asked.

"Sure," Fuzz replied. "What time?"

"Now," I said. "You bring your horse and pick me up."

"Bye," Fuzz said.

Later, I heard a knock at the door and it was Fuzz. Fuzz had a horse with him. I followed Fuzz to it. Fuzz and I got on the horse. I started it. <author’s note: I started the horse? I’m not even going to ask how...>

About a mile down the road, the Metroid attacked us. I took out my sword and stabbed the Metroid and it died. Then a Metroid attacked the horse. Fuzz and I got off the horse and ran down a hill. We ran into a nearby cave. I was very dark and damp.

I saw a lit torch on the wall. It was lit so we could see.

"Fuzz, follow me," I said.

Fuzz followed me into the cave. It got darker the further we went into the cave. I heard something like footsteps.

"Stay here," I said.

I went on ahead of Fuzz. I was very scared. Then I saw a man in blue armor, blue boots and a blue helmet. He attacked me.

"I’m Kain," the man said, "and I’m a dragoon."

He drew out his spear. I drew my weapons, a sword, to fight with. Immediately, I chopped his spear in half. The spear hit the ground with a soft noise.

Fuzz came out of hiding.

 

ChapterVII: A New Friend

"No," Kain yelled.

He ran out of the battle and because it was too dark he bumped into the wall and got knocked out. I went over to Kain to see what happened to him.

"A robot dragon named Dragon Wheel forced me to be on his side," Kain said.

Before Kain could get up, a trap door opened under him and he fell down in a hole.

"Kain!" I yelled.

"But he wrecked our trip," Fuzz said.

"I have a funny feeling about this place," I said.

"I do too," Fuzz said.

Then an trap door opened under us and we fell in a hole. We landed in front of a dragon. The dragon shot fire at me. I jumped over the fire and chopped the dragon’s head off. Then I saw Kain.

"Hi," I said.

Dragon Wheel appeared in front of us.

"Guess this is it," Kain said.

"Let’s get out of here," Fuzz yelled.

"How?" Kain said.

Before we could run, Dragon Wheel attacked with two bats and a Metroid. Kain took his spear and stabbed the two bats. I took my sword and killed the Metroid.

Dragon Wheel threw a Roc egg. I hit the egg and it turned into a Roc larva. Fuzz touched the Roc larva and it turned into a Roc moth, then into a Roc baby, then into a Roc. Kain stabbed his spear into the Roc and it died.

"Finally," Kain said.

Dragon Wheel shot electric at Kain and he became unconscious.

"Kain," I yelled.

There was a flashing thing on Dragon Wheel, so I took my sword and stabbed Dragon Wheel in the flashing spot.

"Let’s get out of here," Fuzz said.

"Okay," I said.

 

Chapter VIII: Fabul

We walked out of the cave and saw a castle. The castle had a gray wall which surrounded it on all sides. At each corner of the wall there was a tower.

"Wait here, Fuzz," I said. "Your friend will be here. After I find your friend, I’ll leave you-"

"Why," Fuzz said.

"Because, I think you’re of no help."

I went over to one of the guards and said, "May I talk to Yang?"

The guard came back with a Karate Man. He had no shirt, red shorts, black shin and black hair.

"Fuzz," I yelled. I looked around, but did not see him. "Fuzz!"

"Hi, I’m Yang," the man said.

"My friend told me that the bad guys are going to attack here. My mission is to defend your castle."

"Okay," Yang said.

I followed Yang into a room. He gave me a sword sharper than the one I had. Then we went to the front of the castle. I was trembling because I thought of defeat.

"They’re here!" a guard yelled.

Three men attacked Yang and me with swords. There were two Fighters followed by a General. Yang used his claws and jabbed his claw into a fighter and killed him. I took my sword and stabbed the other fighter. He died and the general retreated.

Then ships with helicopter propellers, called airships, bombed the castle.

"We can’t hold them off," I yelled."

"Retreat!" Yang yelled.

Before we could retreat, an Imp came and killed a guard. Yang and I retreated further into the castle. Yang locked the door.

"We must at least hold this ground," I said.

Then I saw Lex in a cage. Before I could break open the lock on the cage, an Imp attacked me. I took my sword and stabbed it into the Imp’s chest and he died. Then I opened the cage and let Lex out.

"I’ll help you," Lex said.

We all retreated into the crystal room. Lex was hanging on to my arm. I knew Lex liked me.

Then Kain walked in. He was still in his blue armor, boots and helmet.

 

Chapter IX: Tim

"Kain, you’re alive," I said.

"Yeah," Kain snarled.

"Fight with us Kain," I asked.

"Sure, but against you!"

Kain cast a spell that paralyzed me. Then a man that looked like Kain walked in. He looked at me and said, "Take my greeting." Then lightning came out of his fingertips. Before the lightning could hit me, a boy about the age of 10 jumped out of nowhere.

"Tim," Lex called.

The lightning bounced off the boy’s (Tim’s) shield, rushed to Kain, and stunned him. Then Golbez retreated.

"Thanks, Tim," Lex said. "Come with us."

"Okay," Tim said.

We ran outside and got on Yang’s airship. Yang stayed behind. The airship took off. We followed Golbez’s airship. Tim pushed a button and a laser shot out of our airship and hit Golbez on his airship, and somehow erased the evil in his mind.

We landed our airship next to Golbez’s airship.

"Kain went into another world," Golbez told me. "And now I must destroy Zeromus, my master."

Golbez got off his airship and went into a cave ahead of him. Tim and I followed.

"Stay here, Lex," I told her.

Tim and I went inside the cave. We were very scared. Inside, I saw Golbez ahead of us. Golbez attacked a creature in front of him, Zeromus. Tim and I joined him. Tim and I attacked Zeromus. After about 15 minutes, Zeromus died.

"There is...ther...ev..." Zeromus puffed. Before Zeromus died, he sent Tim and me to a land with far more technology.